Heyho Nebraska (your name or a typo?
sorry but I really don't know, we don't name people after cities in Germany, so we haven't got "Paris" and "London" here
The icon itself is quite good for your first one. The only thing that looks kinda weird to me is the purple-ish spot right above her left eye (right from your perspective). It's kinda distracting in my opinion, as her face should be the main focus in that image, and it's interrupted/disturbed by that spot.
But as I said, definitely better than my first images, and a very good start