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Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:42 pm

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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby David Wood » Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:24 pm

Fix the perspective on the power button. Also the reflection is off, the angle isn't parallel phone.
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby Maffe811 » Sun Aug 14, 2011 9:21 pm

And the screen reflection looks to shiny and wierd
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby The_Menace » Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:53 am

I like simplicity.
It's cool, but no matter how I look at this, light is off.
Screen reflection does not match the shadow, gradient on the bg doesn't either.
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:34 am

I've tweaked it a bit:

Edited shadow and lighting on screen, is it any better?

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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby Maffe811 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:11 pm

Yeah, the reflection is wrong to.
The bottom part is stretched, and if im not wrong the screen should be the other way...

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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:26 pm

that reflection is wrong..
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby Maffe811 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:24 pm

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I didn't measure the angle and made it correct, but i belive its more correct then yours.
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:36 pm

ok, the reflection angle might be correct to some degree but the proprtions of the image in the reflection are wrong...Look at the distance from the left edge to the screen and then look at the distance in the reflection. Try flipping the reflection layer, horizontally
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby Maffe811 » Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:47 pm

Maffe811 wrote:I didn't measure the angle and made it correct

Whoopsie, i meant i didn't mesure it!

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The two red lines should be parallell!
The light blue lines should be paralell with the pink.
The blue line should have equal distance to the green line.

Ill fiqure out how to make the perfect proportional stuff tomorrow....
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:50 am

yeh the lines are parralel, but they should be in line
I do not understand...
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby humblejohnny20 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:52 pm

teh revision looks fine to me.. Did u make the iPad model also ?
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:21 pm

was that a joke? :L
if it wasn't, well it's my first ever model so I only did one and I wasnt sure how i'd go about doing it so i experimented alot. I might make some more if anyone was interested in this one.

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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby Maffe811 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:20 pm

Would like to see another, try to make a..... Laptop!
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Re: Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

Postby stuart4512 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:44 pm

a laptop! :o ill get back to you on that :/
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