Phone/iPod Model..Photoshop.

[stuart4512]

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After Comments:

[David Wood]

Fix the perspective on the power button. Also the reflection is off, the angle isn't parallel phone.

[Maffe811]

And the screen reflection looks to shiny and wierd

[The_Menace]

I like simplicity.
It's cool, but no matter how I look at this, light is off.
Screen reflection does not match the shadow, gradient on the bg doesn't either.

[stuart4512]

I've tweaked it a bit:

Edited shadow and lighting on screen, is it any better?

[Maffe811]

Yeah, the reflection is wrong to.
The bottom part is stretched, and if im not wrong the screen should be the other way...

Look at the reflection

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[stuart4512]

that reflection is wrong..

[Maffe811]

?
I didn't measure the angle and made it correct, but i belive its more correct then yours.
Please explain!

[stuart4512]

ok, the reflection angle might be correct to some degree but the proprtions of the image in the reflection are wrong...Look at the distance from the left edge to the screen and then look at the distance in the reflection. Try flipping the reflection layer, horizontally

[Maffe811]

I didn't measure the angle and made it correct

Whoopsie, i meant i didn't mesure it!

My point:

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The two red lines should be parallell!
The light blue lines should be paralell with the pink.
The blue line should have equal distance to the green line.

Ill fiqure out how to make the perfect proportional stuff tomorrow....

[stuart4512]

yeh the lines are parralel, but they should be in line
I do not understand...

[humblejohnny20]

teh revision looks fine to me.. Did u make the iPad model also ?

[stuart4512]

was that a joke? :L
if it wasn't, well it's my first ever model so I only did one and I wasnt sure how i'd go about doing it so i experimented alot. I might make some more if anyone was interested in this one.

Thanks

[Maffe811]

Would like to see another, try to make a..... Laptop!

[stuart4512]

a laptop! ill get back to you on that :/