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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby Willy » Tue May 17, 2011 10:41 pm

Nifty :)
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby Willy » Tue May 17, 2011 10:56 pm

Very Cool sounding stuff :)

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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby virtualTune » Thu May 19, 2011 3:42 am

The ad is good the image might look better in low sat or even b/w. Also the third sentence of the ad is too complex and should be revised.

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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby David Wood » Sun May 22, 2011 9:51 pm

Looks good. I think the flame needs enhancement, it's too dull and transparent, add some more blue glow to it.
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby virtualTune » Mon May 23, 2011 12:57 am

I partilay agree with david, though i think it needs a bit more orange.
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby humblejohnny20 » Fri May 27, 2011 10:46 pm

BIG improvement over the church roller coaster ad haha.
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby PsykkoShot » Tue May 31, 2011 3:45 am

I would edit out the keypad in the upper right, and the counter in the top left.
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby virtualTune » Tue May 31, 2011 11:50 am

that would take some serious effort!
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby PsykkoShot » Tue May 31, 2011 7:11 pm

Effort shows! I would also try and edit out the.. Idk whatever the spots on the burner thingy are...
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby virtualTune » Tue May 31, 2011 11:45 pm

dude i wanna see YOU do that! ;)
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby Arzoroc » Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:35 am

Top right is a 2 second thing, the dots on the burner thingy is also done in a matter of seconds, but top left is hard to do tbh ...
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby virtualTune » Wed Jun 01, 2011 8:50 pm

do you mean the dots on the pot or the iron part?
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Re: Fake VISIONS cookware ad

Postby TheWall » Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:33 pm

Hope to see the final result after all recommendations are incorporated. Thanks.
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