i dont see the war. i see a good looking guy wearing nikes (not war), dark jeans and a jacket, all looking like new cloths nothing that would remind me of war.
except the frizzling cliché black and white!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it needs grunge, a fence, a building that is destroyed or ruins, an old castle (not too terribly hard to find in germany, and there are always parts that aren't in best condition). And you (assuming that is you) need to wear worn cloths that look like you haven't been shopping in the last 6 months. Even better would be more expressive posture. Think about it, do you want to be "the hero, a soldier.." or a victim, someone who suffered for a long time? Right now you have a hero posture, but there is nothing that alludes to war. At least hold a gun (airsoft) if you want modern warfare (no not the game!)
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