Concept for an Acer Netbook Campaign

[virtualTune]

I am applying for an internship at a big advertisement company near my city. So they invited me for a talk (for 2 hours) and then the boss gave me an asignment. I had to make a poster and a banner and i just sent it to them. What do you guys think.

Disclaimer: The pictures i used were all from the net since i only had like 2.5 days so not all HQ Also it's in german. the text translates to sth along the lines of "Colourful Lightness"

-vT

Poster:

Spoiler: show

Banner:
http://imgur.com/b27zf

[virtualTune]

thx for the great feedback! We might wanna change "The Gimp Community" to "The Gimp Community's Graveyard"

[RomaGrafix]

Ok ok, give us time, alright?
I think the text rocks, perfect font(what' s it called btw.?), love the background too.
The render of the woman is pretty poorly cut, don' t know if you' re intending it to be like that with your final product, but it looks really bad.
I' m not a fan of the spinning effect on that laptop, as you can only really see that it' s a laptop in the red position, everything else is just too blurred and I don' t like the blunt tip and bottom of the whole effect. I' d make that more pointed too.

[Arzoroc]

I already told you what I think of it
But all in all, Roma sums it up quite fine. Nice font, nice text, bad rendering and bad spinning effect. I also like the acer overlay at the bottom.

[virtualTune]

bad rendering- cuz i didnt have much time and didnt wanna put too much work into a lousy (?) pre-assignment.
Bad spinning effect- worked and tweaked it for hours this is the closest i got. If you have a better idea, let me know.
Overall he is looking for a sort of sketch so if this would be realized there would be a proper shoot and a professional doing the effect/rendering

The font is called: Arista 2.0 Light

Recently downloaded a pack with 1300 Fonts this was in it i think.