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This took me a few hours to make, but i like the results. CnC
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Not bad, isn't the middle line missing the sparks? The bg looks like classic tron.

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Thnx and which middle, the one in the front of the bike? Well idts.

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yo striker! youre here :D

pretty cool, but the shadow dude one, the wheel got cut off?

its not bad, but the spirals kind of ruin the flow almost :S

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sky-fyre wrote:
yo striker! youre here :D

pretty cool, but the shadow dude one, the wheel got cut off?

its not bad, but the spirals kind of ruin the flow almost :S


Yes im here. =)
And thats a reflection off a wall. Thnx for point out the missing wheel part. I gotta fix that lol. And i was worried abt the sparks doing that. Im gonna make a new version with some cnc in mind. =)

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hey i really like it, but i think the sparks, as shadow said ruin it/ They are : the wrong colour, there is no reflection of them in the ground or on the bike, and finally they seem to be to simple for an effect compared to the overall style anf flow(shadow:P) of the piece. I tried to explain myself as good as possible, yet i know that i sometimes fail at that. please let me know if you (anybody) have any questions about the critique.

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hmm nother thought. maybe instead of smudging try the filter>distorts>wind and maybe blur that... idk

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blur the sparks?

i would def. change the colour and opacity

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uh no, the effect on the bike..

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yeah maybe. right now the front looks a little opace becasue of the effect

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Oh i did those effects, its not part of the render. but thnx for the CnC

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ohh the biker is a render >? that changes things! :P

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Of course its a render, i didnt make it. lol

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Haven't you seen the lightcycle VT? (I don't mean to spam your topic Striker)

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Lol thats ok. And it looks prety cool. Simple tho, but nice.

OT: I'm only done with my remake. =D

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