My latest sig

[Holy]

Made it earlier today, took about 2 hours D:

What do you guys think? CnC appreciated

[Arzoroc]

That render has been used the third time now I guess
I did this one 1.5 years ago:

Wow that was so long ago.. I'm getting old

Annyyywayyyy...

I like...
- The colors
- The small black border ("borders are soo 2009!" .. no! they rock!)

I don't like...
- The lightsource. Looks like a simple radial gradient white to transparent on overlay to me. Too simple.
- The lack of depth. Some abstract C4Ds in the foreground/background should especially look nice, as this sig has a futuristic theme.
- The font looks too squirly and nice to me .. the mood of the image is rather aggressive, and the font does not really match this mood.

You could improve...
...by looking at some text, lighting and depth tutorials online. The render itself offers a lot of potential to mess around with.

All in all rating
Beginner [------------[]-----------] Awesome

Further tips/comments
Give us v2

[David Wood]

I would remove the black bars and change the font. Also increase the brightness and contrast and sharpen the focal a little more.

[Maffe811]

There is like this "hey there is depth here" but its not showing enough!

[Despairado]

Made it earlier today, took about 2 hours D:

What do you guys think? CnC appreciated

Let me first say that the Render's colors do not really go well with the background. The text does not match well with the signature eather.
Try and re-color it.

[Ian-]

I think the colors work perfectly fine. Although the font could use a bit of tweaking. So could the lighting. But the colors don't need to be changed, they work well together.

[Despairado]

Well everyone has their own opinion.
Maybe you could darken the background then?