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My latest sig

Postby Holy » Wed Feb 08, 2012 2:47 am

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Made it earlier today, took about 2 hours D:

What do you guys think? CnC appreciated :)
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Re: My latest sig

Postby Arzoroc » Wed Feb 08, 2012 2:31 pm

That render has been used the third time now I guess :D
I did this one 1.5 years ago:
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Wow that was so long ago.. I'm getting old :D

Annyyywayyyy...

I like...
- The colors
- The small black border ("borders are soo 2009!" .. no! they rock!)

I don't like...
- The lightsource. Looks like a simple radial gradient white to transparent on overlay to me. Too simple.
- The lack of depth. Some abstract C4Ds in the foreground/background should especially look nice, as this sig has a futuristic theme.
- The font looks too squirly and nice to me .. the mood of the image is rather aggressive, and the font does not really match this mood.

You could improve...
...by looking at some text, lighting and depth tutorials online. The render itself offers a lot of potential to mess around with.

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Re: My latest sig

Postby David Wood » Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:27 am

I would remove the black bars and change the font. Also increase the brightness and contrast and sharpen the focal a little more.
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Re: My latest sig

Postby Maffe811 » Thu Feb 09, 2012 4:39 pm

There is like this "hey there is depth here" but its not showing enough!
Got möp?
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Re: My latest sig

Postby Despairado » Fri Feb 10, 2012 2:56 am

Holy wrote:Image

Made it earlier today, took about 2 hours D:

What do you guys think? CnC appreciated :)

Let me first say that the Render's colors do not really go well with the background. The text does not match well with the signature eather.
Try and re-color it.
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Re: My latest sig

Postby Ian- » Fri Feb 10, 2012 3:40 am

I think the colors work perfectly fine. Although the font could use a bit of tweaking. So could the lighting. But the colors don't need to be changed, they work well together.
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Re: My latest sig

Postby Despairado » Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:02 am

Well everyone has their own opinion.
Maybe you could darken the background then?
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