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some of my work

Postby dobby » Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:55 pm

this is some of my work.

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Re: some of my work

Postby dobby » Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:55 pm

it not showing up
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Re: some of my work

Postby Maffe811 » Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:55 pm

That sux...
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Re: some of my work

Postby David Wood » Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:17 am

Are you using the [img] tags?
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Re: some of my work

Postby dobby » Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:07 pm

i works now
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Re: some of my work

Postby Maffe811 » Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:00 am

dobby wrote:Image

A really good start, but the pixelation doesn't seem to fit.
Also try to add some detph and maybe the rule of thirds for the focal.

dobby wrote:Image

Really good star here aswell.
Loose the text it takes the attention away from the focal, but then again everything is in focus so its hard to see what really is the focal.
also the transition to dark edges could be smoother. Blur it a bit?

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Here aswell:
- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere.
- Text drawing focus away from focal.

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- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere.
- Text drawing focus away from focal.

dobby wrote:Image

- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere, BUT on the focal... Try bluring the other stuff a bit and sharpen the render.
- Text drawing focus away from focal. Its also very white.

dobby wrote:Image

- Three focals ? Not sure what im looking at. Try to keep it simple
- The text, again.

Now a really good general tip:
DO NO USE TEXT, unless you feel it really fits.
If you look around the forum alot of good sigs don't have text, cause even though the artist is really skilled in the art of making sigs, he isn't skilled in the art of text.
Also, try variating the font.

I tried to suggest how to fix some of the thing. But mainly:
- Get your focus on the focal.
- Leave text, atleast for now.
- Try not to reapeat the same style over again.
Sig 2 to 4 are mainly:
A focal in the middle, some stuff in the bg and a black edge blurred a bit. Then some text.

Try making a new sig, and its easier to comment on 1 sig then 6.
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