some of my work

[dobby]

this is some of my work.

[dobby]

it not showing up

[Maffe811]

That sux...

[David Wood]

Are you using the [img] tags?

[dobby]

i works now

[Maffe811]

A really good start, but the pixelation doesn't seem to fit.
Also try to add some detph and maybe the rule of thirds for the focal.

Really good star here aswell.
Loose the text it takes the attention away from the focal, but then again everything is in focus so its hard to see what really is the focal.
also the transition to dark edges could be smoother. Blur it a bit?

Here aswell:
- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere.
- Text drawing focus away from focal.

- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere.
- Text drawing focus away from focal.

- Transition to dark.
- Focus, sharp everywhere, BUT on the focal... Try bluring the other stuff a bit and sharpen the render.
- Text drawing focus away from focal. Its also very white.

- Three focals ? Not sure what im looking at. Try to keep it simple
- The text, again.

Now a really good general tip:
DO NO USE TEXT, unless you feel it really fits.
If you look around the forum alot of good sigs don't have text, cause even though the artist is really skilled in the art of making sigs, he isn't skilled in the art of text.
Also, try variating the font.

I tried to suggest how to fix some of the thing. But mainly:
- Get your focus on the focal.
- Leave text, atleast for now.
- Try not to reapeat the same style over again.
Sig 2 to 4 are mainly:
A focal in the middle, some stuff in the bg and a black edge blurred a bit. Then some text.

Try making a new sig, and its easier to comment on 1 sig then 6.