you guys need to shut up

[Legionenigmatics]

here's something you can critique and won't cause a rukus anyways the render is sharp like the for NO reason and i could not control the lighting, sorry if that's a problem

[virtualTune]

honestly lighting is totally off so you might aswell use a new render.

[Willy]

I agree the lighting is bad, too bright and the right side seems kinda busy

[Legionenigmatics]

honestly lighting is totally off so you might aswell use a new render.

DARN!

well i wanted to get the "disintegration effect" i failed epically

[virtualTune]

you mean something similar to this?

[iz old ]

[Legionenigmatics]

yes........>_> <_< TEACH ME!

[Legionenigmatics]

wait don't tell me you just use layer mask and clipping mask.....-_- i swear to god

[Arzoroc]

I was just about to write that ...

Anyway, I made a tutorial once about a desintegration effect (viewtopic.php?f=37&t=7883) and Gimpknowhow made a video with a similar style (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1qmjyaYJTo)

Choose one

[Dkitsme]

i really like your idea , but the water looking thing and your render have two completely different directions, and destroys your flow in the signature.

[virtualTune]

i really like your idea , but the water looking thing and your render have two completely different directions, and destroys your flow in the signature.

hehe got the idea..?!

[Legionenigmatics]

was that directed at me? if so then yeah i think i should re-look my layers but i feel this is a fail i will upload the xcf when i get home for you guys to play with

[Arzoroc]

It's messy with stuff just floating everywhere. That's really the only major issue with this tag. Work on controlling your effects. I see potential here, the composition is just really bad.

[virtualTune]

no i was talking about Dk and his response about flow, as I suggested he works on it on an earlier tag. Well, where is version 2?

[Dkitsme]

actually it was the version 2 , i personal dont like it either and was only for pratice.
i have to disappoint you VT.

BUT! i made a new signature where i used a rly hard technique, that went very well but still need a little work.

[David Wood]

VT was talking to Legion, DK. Aside from lighting being messed up you need to get the colors under control, you have yellows, blues, reds, oranges, while the look nice together they need more balance.