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Zack Fair Sig

Discussion in 'Signatures and Small Art' started by guitarist2013, Mar 11, 2010.

  1. guitarist2013

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    I got bored...

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    nice with the flare. mayb blur the bg more so you get more depth. ;)
     
  3. David Wood

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    You really need to fill in the black, also just putting a render on top of a c4d isn't really gfx. Also the flare could be colored blue or green, to match the rest.
     
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    And the C4D ends abruptly on the right, it looks like it' s just cut off there. And you desperately need to fill in that black background with something.
     
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    on the other hand, the way it is right now, makes it seem like he is in open space...


    @RoMa i agree with you. I would add a gradient layer mask so it fades into the black (which you are gonna fill!!!)
     
  6. guitarist2013

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    Eh, I discarded the whole thing, instead I used the render for a wall paper... I like it, but you guys may not, eh...
     
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    I like the wallpaper better, but the smudging needs work, and the background is a little boring. Not bad though.
     
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    Background is supposed to be simple because it's a wall paper. I don't want it to be too "Distracting".

    And ya, I'll clean the smudging up. I tried following a tutorial but I didn't like it and went off on my own thing...

    Thanks! =D
     
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    Here, I tried to clean up smudging and I did something different with another one. Which one do you guys like best?
     
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    i like that!

    for the wallpaper, i think you shouldn't smudge the sword! :|
     
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    Ok, I'll work on that later. As for now, I'm too tired to re-do it. :)
     
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    ;) i am always tired ;D
     

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