Fake VISIONS cookware ad

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  1. Willy

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    Nifty :)
    The lid doesn't match :/
     
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    Very Cool sounding stuff :)

    Any chance your stuck in a Mac?
     
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    The ad is good the image might look better in low sat or even b/w. Also the third sentence of the ad is too complex and should be revised.

    Nice to hear sth from u again! :)
     
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    Looks good. I think the flame needs enhancement, it's too dull and transparent, add some more blue glow to it.
     
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    I partilay agree with david, though i think it needs a bit more orange.
     
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    BIG improvement over the church roller coaster ad haha.
     
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    I would edit out the keypad in the upper right, and the counter in the top left.
     
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    that would take some serious effort!
     
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    Effort shows! I would also try and edit out the.. Idk whatever the spots on the burner thingy are...
     
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    dude i wanna see YOU do that! ;)
     
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    Top right is a 2 second thing, the dots on the burner thingy is also done in a matter of seconds, but top left is hard to do tbh ...
     
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    do you mean the dots on the pot or the iron part?
     
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    Hope to see the final result after all recommendations are incorporated. Thanks.
     
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